Dragaera

Question about Devera

Wed Mar 5 12:06:24 PST 2003


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Jason Derleth [mailto:derleth at MIT.EDU]
> Sent: Wednesday, March 05, 2003 14:00
> To: circadian rhyme
> Cc: SKZB List
> Subject: Re: Question about Devera
> 
> 
> circadian rhyme wrote:
> 
> > Warlord writes:
> >   I reiterate the opinion that syntax and "official correctness" are
> >   secondary objectives to getting ones *meaning* across to the 
> recipient.
> > 
> > I am curious how you propose to get one's meaning across to the
> > recipient if you're not using a common syntax and 
> spelling/pronunciation.
> > 
> > rone
> 
> 
> In Shakespeare's time it was considered a sign of intelligence if you 
> could spell words in many different ways; syntax abuses are quite 
> common in artistic writing. They even have names...synecdoche is where 
> one uses a part of what you are speaking of to replace the whole. (An 
> example: "They sent my lover's tallness off to war.") Strictly 
> speaking, if one is trying to convey meaning, these abuses obfuscate 
> intent, yet they make the language more beautiful and the meaning 
> somehow gets across anyway.
> 
> In fact, Steven Brust often tortures syntax: it is more efficient for 
> communication to use short sentences, ones that have no clauses in 
> them, Steve, though, uses lots and lots of clauses; perhaps--just 
> perhaps--that's the artistic, purposeful way he writes, but, in 
> reality, I think that's the nature of the way artistic humans 
> think--they use clauses because their thoughts are nested, connected, 
> and layered.
> 
> Of course, this last sentence-paragraph of mine doesn't come anywhere 
> close to the first sentence of _To Reign in Hell_. :)
> 

I believe DDB said it best a while back:

"I think you are done when there are no longer any prepositions within
shouting distance of the ends of independent clauses, no?"

W  ( who loves shouting at independent clauses )