On Sat, Jan 31, 2004 at 11:31:56AM -0600, Lawrence Jenab wrote: > I get the same feeling. It's the one that hovers (IMO) over Glen Cook's > later Garrett novels. For one thing, small plot elements begin to consume > more and more pages. You get the feeling the author is mechanically moving > the characters from place to place, rather than paring down exposition and > description to the minimum necessary to support the hot-potato story he > can't wait to get onto the page ("Now I'm going to show you something REALLY > cool"). . . . Exactly so. The early Garrett stories approached 'really cool.' By the sixth or seventh I could look at a recent one and not remember if I'd read it or not. They simply got mechanical. -- "I try not to sound old and cynical, but it's hard to do that when you're old and cynical." -me