Dragaera

proofreading

Sun May 2 05:36:33 PDT 2004

On Tue, 27 Apr 2004 13:53:06 -0400, you wrote:

>MJ replied:
>> Actually, I was thinking of CFSB&G, and _Teckla_.  I am so 
>
>Ah.  I like _Teckla_ too, but I get the feeling that lotsa folks get
>squeamish about the politics.  Those who don't are likely to be upset
>that our hero is losing his gal.  Kick, smack, hug away.  I like the
>central role Noish-pa has in this and Pheonix.  Teckla makes Vlad much
>more human, less high and mighty.  Gee, I wonder why? :)
>

_Teckla_ is, IMO, a very well written book, where Steve really finds
his voice with Vlad.  However, it's so well written it can be painful
for me to read.

He captured the breakup of a relationship perfectly; reading _Teckla_
gives me flashbacks to my divorce.

I didn't mind the politics at all.  I'm a socialist, but I thought
Kelly was ruthlessly idealistic and failed to see the reality of the
situation.  The Empire just wasn't ready for that revolution, so it
couldn't work.