On Sun, 20 Feb 2005, Frank Mayhar wrote: > Philip Hart wrote: > > Your hair is now less golden underneath the Overcast. > > "Beneath." > I just think it scans better. Well, it scans perfectly in iambic septameter (aka fourteeners) as far as I can tell, but you can sing it "Your hair now grows less gold beneath the darkening Overcast." if you prefer.