Like Konrad, I'll be posting a series of detailed notes, which I'll mark with [DbS] in the subject (DbS = Distracted by Shadows, naturally). In this post, I've pulled out some of the ones I think are the most interesting. Later, I'll post the full thing separately; one big hope is that it will speed up textev searches, but that also means it is probably too tedious for most people to want to read it straight. - tky 1992 Tor mmpb cover art: {I scribbled "wing looks funny (gap?)". I don't remember for sure what "gap?" means, but I note today that the wings kind of blend in with some leaves, which I may have earlier mistaken as part of the wings.} ** ppxiii-xvi. [Paarfi's] Preface pxiv: "for far away" {typo: "far far away"?} Mistress Fornell's poem, "Return to Me, My City", stanza 93: quiet Tiassa, Yendi, gallant Lavode; ** p1. [start of] Book One ** pp3-16. ch1 pp4-5: [describe Khaavren] {physiognomy: poetic license, deluded author, truth? Cosmetic surgery or body sculpting? Are shapeshifters common?} {Do his clothes indicate level of: tech, economy, commerce?} p5: kerosene lamps {fossil fuel reserve?} p5: making up his mind to wait patiently {Khaavren impatient, Paarfi verbose!} p8: [describe Aerich]; very tall for his House; vambraces p9: Aerich: knife, not sword; sword = honor must never touch the ground p10: Aerich: graceful & sudden p15: Aerich of Pel: Yendi <-- only House not identifiable by face or clothing p16: Khaavren of Aerich: admires coolness, mystery, I will find you out; any mistrust vanished, and never returned as long as they knew each other {"knew" = acquainted with, not "understand and trust", right?} ** pp17-24. ch2 p17: the jump across the Lonely Ridge in the Kanefthali Mountains {Orca?} pp21-22: conversation resumes. Hrivaan: coming darkness, Phoenix = rebirth & decay; every Phoenix emperor, except Zerika I (founder of Empire), grew decadent, practiced evil arts, neglected Empire, until Cycle turned and Dragon arrived. 18 = 17+1 = 1st Phoenix after a complete Cycle = especially bad {17+1 reasoning is interesting: why not expect #17 to be the worst?} p24: fauna: antelope, tsmalmoth