[page 59] Khaavren pays the body bearers (2 Orbs * 4). Compare to FHYA where he carries the body himself. "the precision of detail only a Tiassa is capable of" odd, I'd've thought Lyorns would be more precise. [page 60] Love this dialogue Map: Castlegate perimeter [page 61] Pel's partner Athyra? Nope [page 47] [page 62] Map: Street of the Cold Fires, Circle of the Fountain of the Darr [page 63] Map: County Sandyhome no military value "... is now in the possession of the Easterners." "Yes, yes, in fact, it was a Dzur who led the expedition..." Huh? Are only Dzur allowed in Easterner lands? Map: Pepperfields necessary to security of Empire [page 65] typo: "It give me ..." Map: hills of Brambletown district, Street of Ringing Bells [page 69-71] Map: the house Street of the Glass Cutters, 1 mi from Dragon Gate across from Hammerhead Inn, home of Thorny Rose Army behind(?) is temple of Verra, also facing Hammerhead Inn further down the street (away from Palace?) private hospital built by Jhegaala merchant Early Volanthe (towers, rounded walls, painted stonework) open and airy in front with circular porch back enclosed by large twostem bushes back shaded by 3 oaks (eq triangle) and sugar maple in center Pel: isolated chamber in back, own door to garden Khaavren: second floor room with balcony facing street Aerich: narrow room next to K, preferred room Tazendra: next to A, part of back wall, tower, kitchen stairway living room on first floor one more sleeping chamber for Srahi Time: house built for retirement which happened in Teckla R. merchant died 300 years later trees planted at beginning of Athyra Reign [page 71] Time: forty years after Revolt of the Livery one meal a day? must not be hobbits Khaavren and Aerich normally wake at 9/9:30 (are they still on night shifts?), Pel and Tazendra already up [page 72] Khaavren better swordsman than Tazendra who had an exclusive trainer Srahi wakes in afternoon, makes their meal, they leave to start their duties at the Palace [page 73] Warlord in charge of all military except Lavodes Sethra resigned when banned from court many years ago (Lavode scandal?) captain-general of Imperial Army, brigadier-general of Imperial Guard, both vacant G'aereth: Red Boot Company, sixty or seventy members, no lieutenants Lanmarea: White Sash Battalion, 200 members, guards Emperor (favor from Consort) Time: brigadier-general of guards vacant for 1000(!) years [page 74-75] one third of guard female [page 75] Tazendra only one to accept bribes, immediately gambles with it [page 76] Time: three weeks later [page 78-79] gender issues [page 80] no police since Revolt of the Livery [page 84] typo: "not" [page 85] Map: klava hole several doors down from Hammerhead Inn --KG