On 29 Nov 2002, David Dyer-Bennet wrote:
[...]
#> The Jhereg got his revenge
#> The Tiassa his reward
#> And the Dragon was dissolved in swirling Chaos
#> When he tried to take the Orb
#>
#> Now, nobody's seen the Jhereg
#> The Tiassa can still draw blood
#> And the Dragon's ghost haunts the Lesser Sea of Chaos
#> Where Dragaera City once stood
#
#That's very nice indeed. A couple of lines need to be force-fit for
#emphasis, but at least they're *consistent* about it.
Thank you. I figured I had good precedent for the force-fitting in the
original:
And the Devil got his claw on the little taiLOR
With the broadcloth under his arm
and
And the little taiLOR goes skipping through Hell
With the broadcloth under his arm
-- Mark A. Mandel, The Filker With No Nickname
http://world.std.com/~mam/filk.html