Dragaera

TLoCB typos [no spoilers]

Sun Aug 3 10:28:40 PDT 2003

Well, I've finished my first read-through of the new one.  Although I usually
save note-taking behavior for subsequent passes, I do try and note typos the
first time through, as they are harder to see with each re-read.

Page 223, about half-way down the page, on the right margin, "my" should
actually be "may".

Page 249, about 3/4 of the way down, straddling two lines, I suspect that
the phrase "choose not acknowledge" should actually read "choose not to 
acknowledge".  The form as printed is both archaic and awkward, but Paarfi 
being who he is, that may have been intentional.

Alexx

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