On Sun, Aug 03, 2003 at 01:28:40PM -0400, Alexx S Kay <alexx at TheWorld.com> wrote: > Well, I've finished my first read-through of the new one. Although I usually > save note-taking behavior for subsequent passes, I do try and note typos the > first time through, as they are harder to see with each re-read. > > Page 223, about half-way down the page, on the right margin, "my" should > actually be "may". > > Page 249, about 3/4 of the way down, straddling two lines, I suspect that > the phrase "choose not acknowledge" should actually read "choose not to > acknowledge". The form as printed is both archaic and awkward, but Paarfi > being who he is, that may have been intentional. Page 308. "How, you have done a Seeing?" "Exactly. Thirty hours from now, all we be clear." Should be "will" instead of "we", most likely. -- Matthew Hunter (matthew at infodancer.org) Public Key: http://matthew.infodancer.org/public_key.txt Homepage: http://matthew.infodancer.org/index.jsp Politics: http://www.triggerfinger.org/index.jsp