Dragaera

TLoCB typos [no spoilers]

Sun Aug 3 12:33:38 PDT 2003

On Sun, Aug 03, 2003 at 01:28:40PM -0400, Alexx S Kay <alexx at TheWorld.com> wrote:
> Well, I've finished my first read-through of the new one.  Although I usually
> save note-taking behavior for subsequent passes, I do try and note typos the
> first time through, as they are harder to see with each re-read.
> 
> Page 223, about half-way down the page, on the right margin, "my" should
> actually be "may".
> 
> Page 249, about 3/4 of the way down, straddling two lines, I suspect that
> the phrase "choose not acknowledge" should actually read "choose not to 
> acknowledge".  The form as printed is both archaic and awkward, but Paarfi 
> being who he is, that may have been intentional.

Page 308.  

"How, you have done a Seeing?"
"Exactly.  Thirty hours from now, all we be clear."

Should be "will" instead of "we", most likely.

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