On Sun, Aug 03, 2003 at 02:33:38PM -0500, Matthew Hunter (matthew at infodancer.org) said: > On Sun, Aug 03, 2003 at 01:28:40PM -0400, Alexx S Kay > <alexx at TheWorld.com> wrote: > > Well, I've finished my first read-through of the new one. Although I usually > > save note-taking behavior for subsequent passes, I do try and note typos the > > first time through, as they are harder to see with each re-read. > > > > Page 223, about half-way down the page, on the right margin, "my" should > > actually be "may". > > > > Page 249, about 3/4 of the way down, straddling two lines, I suspect that > > the phrase "choose not acknowledge" should actually read "choose not to > > acknowledge". The form as printed is both archaic and awkward, but Paarfi > > being who he is, that may have been intentional. > > Page 308. > > "How, you have done a Seeing?" > "Exactly. Thirty hours from now, all we be clear." > > Should be "will" instead of "we", most likely. Mostly, my Inner Editor helpfully corrects such things somewhere on the way from my retina to my frontal lobe. Which I suppose I shouldn't complain too much about, since it helps my enjoyment of books. But I did see: Page 9, "First" should be "Fourth". Unless the book is going backward in time, which it appears not to be doing. -- Jim Toth jtoth at megrez.org "And remember, it don't mean a thing if it ain't got that certain je ne sais quois" -- Peter Schickele