Too tired to write like Paarfi, so writing like that other guy today. OK, everyone else probably knows this, but I didn't, so I thought I'd mention . . . The first time Vlad teleports to Castle Black, he notices the Overcast beneath him, and above, more of the same. OTOH, in Athyra, Rocza is able to fly through the Overcast in one breath. Which she holds. Because it's toxic. Seems to me Morrolan is a smart enough fellow not to fly his castle in the middle of a toxic smog cloud. Also, I remain unsatisfied about teleportation in and around Greymist Valley. Morrolan teleported into the middle of the cat-centaurs' plain. Couldn't he have gotten the closer coordinates from Sethra, instead of walking till he made them out himself? When he *did* teleport to the edge of Blood River it was close enough to the different houses' launch-points that I am willing to concede teleportation to and from launches is possible, though probably difficult, what with corpses, boats, and whatnot. However, it certainly wasn't during the Interregnum--I've already forgotten what it was like in PoTD for Zerika and her party . . . Speaking of which, I *did* catch a major glitch. Morrolan says he had Zerika's back when she jumped Deathgate Falls. PoTD says that he was *not* with her party. Hey, Steve, howsabout you let me see each new manuscript; I'll reread the entire oeuvre and check the 'script for consistency. How 'bout it? Mia