On Mon, 10 Nov 2003, David Silberstein wrote: > On Mon, 10 Nov 2003, Philip Hart wrote: > > >For comparison, check out this recent poem, which has two "stunt" > >features, but ones which are intended to support the content: > >http://www.slac.stanford.edu/~philiph/bagel.htm > > > I am not sure what stunt features you refer to. I see that there is > alliteration and repetition, but perhaps you are referring to > something more complicated? A poem about a bagel with more than 50 ingredients is imho a stunt. Also note the unusual rhyme scheme. > Even thought I have eaten a filling supper, I find that reading it > makes me hungry all over again. Bother. Memo to self: pick up > dozen freshly baked bagels. Have your baker send me a commission. Perhaps the 13th from the baker's dozen.