Dragaera

Below Hypothesis

David Silberstein davids at kithrup.com
Mon Nov 10 22:44:19 PST 2003

On Mon, 10 Nov 2003, Philip Hart wrote:

>On Mon, 10 Nov 2003, David Silberstein wrote:
>
>> On Mon, 10 Nov 2003, Philip Hart wrote:
>>
>> >For comparison, check out this recent poem, which has two "stunt"
>> >features, but ones which are intended to support the content:
>> >http://www.slac.stanford.edu/~philiph/bagel.htm

>A poem about a bagel with more than 50 ingredients is imho a stunt.

But it does not read (to me) as though all of those ingredients are
on the bagel at the same time.  There *is* the word "or" in there,
suggesting rather a plethora of possibilities, 50 different *ways* to
eat that bagel.  Or perhaps a smörgåsbord, where all of the
ingredients are laid out, and sundry combinations can be tried.

And a poem about all of them is apparantly the work of an hungry
hedonist, rather than necessarily a stunt.  But what do I know?

>> Even thought I have eaten a filling supper, I find that reading it
>> makes me hungry all over again.  Bother.  Memo to self: pick up
>> dozen freshly baked bagels.
>
>Have your baker send me a commission.  Perhaps the 13th from the
>baker's dozen. 
>

Well, and I am indeed tempted to do just that.