Dragaera

random comments on The Enchantress of Dzur Mountain: Spoilers

Tue Apr 20 23:35:08 PDT 2004

While we're on the subject of proofreading, I'll offer up my list of
typoes that I noticed (in the hopes of improving a later printing
and/or the paperback).

p. 43:  "foul" for "fowl"
p. 104:  "how were able" instead of "how you were able"
p. 210:  "villiage"
p. 305:  "seen too" (instead of "seen to")
p. 339:  "Barrit"  (it's spelled "Baritt", isn't it?  I'm almost sure.)

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