Selected notes, with an attempt to suppress duplicates in common with KG's. - tky ** pp87-96. ch9 "Attempt Private Discussion" pp87-88: [pike = insignia associated with Empire's security] p88: Dekkan e'Tenith: short, heavily built Dragon, red hair, pale complexion; {description important later, or here just to reinforce the idea that Khaavren is perceptive?} p90: Khaavren interjection: Bloody Throne pp89-90: tall, haughty-looking young Dzur of perhaps ~500; -"wassup?"-; short, dark brown hair; beret; piercing, slanted eyes; very thick brows; wore black; only decoration = Lavode seal on beret; broadsword; wizard's staff; {this is Gyorg: see also p109 for more description} pp92-93: Kurich's pike & old Athyra woman: Khaavren realizes it is the other side of the room Dekkan was guarding {was Khaavren there before Tazendra?} p92: Tazendra interjection: Cracks and Shards p96: Dekkan interjection: Cracks in the Orb {Orb already has cracks, prior to Adron's disaster / visiting Paths of the ?} {does Paarfi slip up with regard to revivification? see pp115-116. I think Jhereg, ch6, p53 in TBoJ has a revision re: Jhereg sending a message by returning a messenger's head in a basket -- original version had an anachronistic reference to non-revifiable in an event that happened pre-Interregnum and hence pre-revifications} p96: "they wen to celebrate" {typo: wen <--> went}; inn favored by G'aereth's Company {typo? Company <--> company} ** pp97-102. ch10 "Tazendra Personal History" p97: everyone else home or passed out except for Khaavren & Tazendra; Khaavren: never drank excessively due to a childhood experience {!}, head starts to swim after 5 drinks in 5 hours; Tazendra: could drink a lot & retain most of her faculties; [geography] Dragaera River p97: Tazendra interjection: The Orb! Did you mark our friend Pel? p98: Khaavren interjection, of Aerich: Kieron's Boots! Such speed! pp100-101: The Rose Bush inn; Tazendra losing money to 2 Iorich; {do roses signify something? Rose Bush inn? Thorny Rose Army p82?} ** pp103-117. ch11 "Plot = Soup + Starch: Begins, at Last, to Thicken" pp103-104: Nylissit & Hrivain commiserate re: the Consort, "a woman of frost": uninterested in gift or jewels; surrender impossible; stake: us, our friends, the Empire {huh?}; ideas usually from sister; both think they know what Consort most wants, but do not name it or their next meeting place pp104-105: streets not designed for horse travel p105: Khaavren blushes; Nylissit: name is Khaav'n, like the wine? Khaavren: I style myself after the district of those grapes, pronunciations differ slightly, what's your real name?, at your service; Nylissit: Illista {Nylissit, Illista: sound like "illicit", Vallista} pp106-107: Illista says she'll tell him later: the inn where he killed Frai; Khaavren is surprised she knows; Illista: I know a great deal of what happens in the city p107: {I don't understand why I wrote: "he <--> we"} pp107-108: Aerich: G'aereth spoke unofficially with me (G'aereth knows; the Captain does not); Khaavren: discussed without the Orb {with, not *under*, the Orb?} p108: G'aereth's warnings: Dekkan hot-blooded, {Tazendra puzzled by why Kurich is a familiar name} Kurich = younger brother of Warlord Lytra e'Tenith; p109: (cont'd) Dzur of pp89-91 = Gyorg = Lavode captain: annoyed at them; fiery dark eyes, hooked nose, thin lips; all Lavodes: warrior & wizard p110: as full as holes as the Ballini Tower {?} p110: Srahi: insolent to Tazendra, haughty to Khaavren, suspicious of Aerich, fear + some worship of Pel {why?}; Khaavren doesn't know what Pel is crocheting p111: {Khaavren needs facial control} echoes of his thoughts flitted across his features pp111-112: {does Dragaeran have vous/tu distinction?} Khaavren: friend Pel, for so I hope I may call you; Pel: yes p112: Pel: "I am only to happy" {typo: to <--> too} p112: [Serioli] Pel: *Konechno*, {typo: I <--> It} I would be my pleasure p112: Pel: Empress Cherova 3rd vacated throne & Tortaalik 1st ascended 11 weeks ago; Aerich sat back & drained his wine cup, Tazendra leaned forward anxiously, Khaavren leaned forward {why these reactions?} p113: {Tazendra apparently confused but trying to hide it} -"we knew"-, -"well, but not why"-, determined not to be left out, beginning to look flushed p114: {Tazendra continues to bluff} Tazendra: I'd done the same, only -- I don't paint; p114: clear as Threefalls Rivers [sic] {why not "River of Threefalls"?} pp114-115: Pel: Dragon House argued over who was to be the next duke of Pepperfield: a far eastern fief, held by Dragon House in its own name; Dragon Heir's line = Marquis's line = e'Tenith vs e'Kieron; Aerich: e'Lanya, not e'Tenith {Pel really believed it was e'Tenith, or was that a "Usenet-style misinformation probe" to draw out corrections?} {To do: skim Jhereg, Yendi, FHYA for revivification & Norathar connections: Jhereg in The Book of Jhereg: ch13, pp120-121: 2nd Jhereg-Dragon war, Dragon coup, decadent Phoenix, boom! ch14, p134: Mellar/Leareth's father killed Jhereg protected by Lord Adron Yendi in The Book of Jhereg: ch10, p254: e'Kieron Dragonhead colors: blue eye + green eye {which is which?} p255, p256: Dragon Heir saga: Dragon council, e'Lanya line: Lady Miera & Lord K'laiyer & daughter Norathar, accusation, war, parents killed, faked scans p258: Norathar asks why her parents weren't revivified {error? doesn't revivification post-date the Disaster?} p259: 400+ years ago ch12, p272: e'Lanya Dragonhead colors: 2 red eyes ch15, p296: Sorcereress in Green, Norathar declared bastard, dead parents, Adron becomes Dragon Heir p297: Baritt dead after Aliera shows up, Norathar setup to die, Norathar inconveniently revivified, Laris, Welok p299: Adron vs K'lairer re: immediacy of decadent Phoenix problem p300: end of the Great Cycle, hence decadence particularly bad {what about TPG pp20-21? doesn't it say Great Cycle + 1 = worst?} pp301-303: Sorceress in Green's motivation -- place "right" Warlord to invade the East, e.g. Sethra the Younger ch16, p305: One never knows where a Yendi lives {what of Pel in TPG? Khaavren & Aerich note Pel's isolated room with its own door p70. Pel often gone when Khaavren & Aerich rise p71. Besides cultivating female contacts, does he hang out at his own bolt hole(s)?} p308: dead guards up again, even those slain by Blackwand! {magically controled puppets rather than actual re-animation, since Blackwand presumably destroyed the souls?} } pp115-116: Tortaalik ordered Lanmarea to arrest Kathana: spine severed + several paint brushes in his eyes = mortal wounding without following dueling code {"mortal" = "can't save life", rather than "can't revivify", right?} pp116-117: Khaavren proproses they 4 apprehend Kathana without orders from G'aereth; Pel evaluates: Lanmarea disservice, please G'aereth and --with a quick glance at Aerich-- certain others {huh?};