At 10:26 PM 4/13/2004, Philip Hart wrote: >spoilers for _TEoDM_ > > > > > > > > > >again, spoilers for the Pirodessey or the end of the Paarfiad or ... > > > > > > > > > > > > > > >2. The editing in this volume seems to me to have been the best by far. >I only caught a "the the". Well, that and the lack of several >sentences in Paarfi's Afterward conversation on pg 345. One irrelevant, but confusing typo on p242, "When she [the Sorceress in Green] approached Morrolan and Sethra..." (should have been Sethra and Sethra the Younger -- Morrolan is supposed to be nowhere near the battlefield) made me wonder if the order of events was changed at some point in the course of editing the novel. Morrolan in the east seems to know an awful lot about what's going on in the battlefield. marty