On 18 Apr 2004 at 16:32, Marty Kagan wrote Date sent: Sun, 18 Apr 2004 16:32:59 -0700 To: dragaera at dragaera.info From: Marty Kagan <mak at akamai.com> Subject: Re: random comments on The Enchantress of Dzur Mountain: Spoilers > At 10:26 PM 4/13/2004, Philip Hart wrote: > >spoilers for _TEoDM_ > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > >again, spoilers for the Pirodessey or the end of the Paarfiad or ... > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > One irrelevant, but confusing typo on p242, "When she [the Sorceress > in Green] approached Morrolan and Sethra..." (should have been Sethra > and Sethra the Younger -- Morrolan is supposed to be nowhere near the > battlefield) made me wonder if the order of events was changed at some > point in the course of editing the novel. Morrolan in the east seems > to know an awful lot about what's going on in the battlefield. > > marty > I noticed that too - I just didn't get around to looking it up so I could comment (thanks for doing the work Marty!). The typo (if that's what it is) felt very blatant, like it was put there to see if we were paying attention. M Michele Riccio mr1 at rcosta.com