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_SL_ typoes (was: random comments on The Enchantress of Dzur Mountain)

Gaertk at aol.com Gaertk at aol.com
Wed Apr 21 12:40:58 PDT 2004

In a message dated 4/21/2004 2:35:08 AM Eastern Daylight Time, goldfarb at OCF.Berkeley.EDU writes:

> While we're on the subject of proofreading, I'll offer up my list of
> typoes that I noticed (in the hopes of improving a later printing
> and/or the paperback).
> 
> p. 43:  "foul" for "fowl"
> p. 104:  "how were able" instead of "how you were able"
> p. 210:  "villiage"
> p. 305:  "seen too" (instead of "seen to")
> p. 339:  "Barrit"  (it's spelled "Baritt", isn't it?  I'm almost sure.)

And two I saw:

p. 27 (near the bottom): "Here are a list"
p. 90: last line shouldn't end with a "


--KG