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Grammar [was Re: random comments on The Enchantress of Dzur Mountain: Spoilers]

Thu Apr 22 15:02:27 PDT 2004

--- Sean Whalen <stlatos at yahoo.com> wrote:
...

>    I might as well add some grammatical errors I found
> in the books (even though I doubt any of them will
> ever be changed).
> 
>    These are in the hardcover editions.
> 
> _The Paths of the Dead_, page 31, line 5:  "Do you
> know a place where a traveler such as myself" used
> without previous form of I/me/my in the phrase.

That requires someone to decide whether "I" or "me" is called
for.  (I'd vote for "I".)

> _The Paths of the Dead_, page 362, line 23:  "feed my
> friend Ibronka and I" should have "me" instead of "I".
...

> _The Lord of Castle Black_, page 265, line 35:  "of he
> for whom this history is named" should have "him"
> instead of "he".
> 
> _Sethra Lavode_, page 223, line 30:  "lost its ability
> to defend either itself, or she who" should have "her"
> instead of "she".

Those last three drive me crazy.  Good thing being crazy doesn't
interfere with my ability to read these books.

>    Most of these mistakes seem to be examples of
> hypercorrection.  If speakers of one dialect usually
> use "Me and Johnny" as the subject of a sentence but
> know that preferred English uses "Johnny and I" as a
> subject they will replace me with I in more situations
> than they should when they try to speak in what they
> think is a classier manner.

What you said.

Jerry Friedman


	
		
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